Saturday Email Review
February 13, 2010
This email needs no introduction or comment: I’ll let you at it.
Hi–
I wrote a book, and it’s cool. I think that it will sell, and it’s 150 pages long in an 8.5 by 11 format. I think you’ll like it, and I think that you’ll do a good job selling it for me. You are the best.
Hugs.
Okay there you go, In its glory.
2 Comments
JS
Oh my! What's this buddy up to?
Analysis:
Too much use of 'I'.
'I think' used thrice, as if telling that he/she has brains.
"You'll do a good job selling it for me." Phew!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poof!!!!!
Rebecca
Personally the hugs was when I said no.