How do you describe emotions and the feelings in a true and believable fashion?

I suspect my most difficult thing is that I need to avoid the wonderful world of “he yelled as he stomped out of the room slamming the door”

I am working on the emotions in the words.

“I don’t know” or better yet “To my knowledge, which is limited, this is an unknown”

Cliches are a pain as well and I see them all the time. One small sentence and boom! the whole piece fails.

But that is why we all do a draft.

Twisting time is running on time, as About September, is beginning.

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